8-30-2007 Outline Format of Miss South Carolina's Speech
In a vain attempt to better visualize her points, I put them into outline form. Here are the results.
Original Speech:
"I personally believe that U.S. Americans are unable to do so because, um, some people out there in our nation don't have maps and, uh, I believe that our, uh, education like such as, uh, South Africa and, uh, the Iraq and everywhere like such as, and I believe that they should, uh, our education over here in the U.S. should help the U.S., uh, should help South Africa and should help Iraq and the Asian countries, so we will be able to build up our future."
Outline Format:
I. I personally believe that U.S. Americans are
unable to do so because:
A. “um”
B. some people out there in our nation don't have
maps
C. “uh”
II. I believe that our, uh, education like such
as:
A. “uh”
B. South Africa
C. “uh”
D. the Iraq
E. and everywhere, like such as:
1. I believe that they should, so we will be able
to build up our future.
a. uh, our education over here in the U.S. should
help the U.S.,
b. uh, should help South Africa
c. and should help Iraq and the Asian countries
